Sounds like you just put a midi file into Edirol..
It also sounds like there needs to be a bit of mastering done on this tune. I'd recommend changing up the arrangement of the song as well to give it a more orchestrated feel. It's kind of dry right now and sounds like it needs more too it and a cleaner sound. It almost sounds muffled.
Keep trying...
ok man
Not much to really say here..
I like what you're trying, but like Garn I don't feel like there's enough that happens. I'll admit I didn't listen to the whole thing, but I did skip through the song and as I did it sort of sounded like the piece wa looping with little changes. Change up the song a little bit here and there. Add a different instrument or something. Make it get loud, mess with the dynamics. I don't completely understand what you're trying but I do like it and I think it could work. You just need to keep experimenting. And lose some of the repetitiveness in the song. This isn't the type of song split to sections, use that to your advantages.
Keep at it.
I actually mean things to start ugly and unconstructed. The main attraction is supposed to be the hip hop drums, I think, that start around 30 seconds in.
Hm. "Variation." "Lose some of the repetitiveness." So far the consensus here is the song is stagnant? That doesn't sound impossible to over come. I suppose I can start by morphing the organ type thing probably.
I thought it sounded familiar..
You used the midi file from VG music..
I'm not going to rate down because of that though. The mixing is amazing and I can tell you took a lot of time with this mix.
It's a rave all over right now. It's very clean and crisp. :)
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